Aww, those are both wonderful! The first one is both warm and understated, just like the dynamic in the scene you describe. Quiet and with a lovely sensual thrill at the end.

The second gave me a giggle, indeed. It's somehow so fun to torture Zach a bit; he scowls so fetchingly. :D I can't help but imagine him jumping to ravish Lavender in that frilly pink housecoat. To prove he's still a sexy manly bloke and all that. *g*